A Splash Of Culture
Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about Robert Schole's opinion on commercials and cultural reinforcement regarding my commercial(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though some products do not need explaining about their purpose or what they may be used for, not everybody should be able to interpret the commercial I chose without having a storehouse of cultural information because There is not enough information within less than 30 seconds to explain the unknown product's use and people in other cultures may not know anything about the product the commercial is selling .
Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
some products do not need explaining about their purpose or what they may be used for- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that some products do not need explaining about their purpose or what they may be used for is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #2
Even though some products do not need explaining about their purpose or what they may be used for, not everybody should be able to interpret the commercial I chose without having a storehouse of cultural information because There is not enough information within less than 30 seconds to explain the unknown product's use.- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that There is not enough information within less than 30 seconds to explain the unknown product's use is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason not everybody should be able to interpret the commercial I chose without having a storehouse of cultural information is because people in other cultures may not know anything about the product the commercial is selling .- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that people in other cultures may not know anything about the product the commercial is selling is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph.
- Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence.
Conclusion
So you can see that although some products do not need explaining about their purpose or what they may be used for, not everybody should be able to interpret the commercial I chose without having a storehouse of cultural information for two main reasons. First, There is not enough information within less than 30 seconds to explain the unknown product's use. But most importantly, people in other cultures may not know anything about the product the commercial is selling .- Now you will return to your attention-getter from the introduction
- Then end your essay with a powerful So What? statement that shows why the reader should care about this.
No comments:
Post a Comment